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Listen Baby by ~quetions:iconquetions:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Open


I don’t know…
                         What you’re looking for…
And I don’t know where to find it…
I’m just as lost…

                   as you are
But we’re all
                      just wading in this
                                                   ocean.
And these answers we seek,
                                                                                     we’ll never find.
Listen baby,
               It’s a lost cause.

And we seem to be     in this moment….              
                          Drowning
I can’t give you the answers...
I don’t even know them myself.
But these notions….
                                                         will wash with the tide

But…
                                             I’m trying,         
                 can’t you see?
But if you give up… then,
                                        where will you be?
Just let this go,
                              You’ll see…
These things might work out finally….
I know that things seem to be getting harder…
            And life is pushing you by…
All I’m asking you for is trust …
                  And to give this more time…

Listen baby,
               It’s a lost cause.

And we seem to be     in this moment….              
                          Drowning
I can’t give you the answers...
I don’t even know them myself.
But these notions….
                                                         will wash with the tide
©2007-2009 ~quetions
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~JewelPhoenix Apr 11, 2007, 1:57:56 PM
touching...I like it very much
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~Jyueru Apr 11, 2007, 1:59:12 PM
I like this, especially the mixture of feelings in relation to the water. I do poems like that sometimes. Water is such a good mixer for poetry. This is sad and beautiful =)

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"I have fallen so far from what I was
My skin is forever pale, my eyes a dark ring
Lifeless, a dead type of attraction"
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~quetions Apr 11, 2007, 2:55:14 PM
haha yeah i think so too with water.

It's in a way supposed to be sad because it's for my friend.. she's lost, confussed and doesn't see a point to things and it scares me. I try and comfort her but she expects me to answers things that I don't know... haha yeah anyways! (in case you wanted to know all the mellow drama that happening with me)

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'Caught in the act, sinfully Scrabbling. Quick, eat your words!"
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~quetions Apr 11, 2007, 2:55:33 PM
thank you I really appreaciate it.

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'Caught in the act, sinfully Scrabbling. Quick, eat your words!"
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~Jyueru Apr 12, 2007, 2:44:06 AM
It's okay. I understand. I'm like a mother to some of my friends, even though I'm only two years older (15 i am going on 16) They always ask me for help or talk to me

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"I have fallen so far from what I was
My skin is forever pale, my eyes a dark ring
Lifeless, a dead type of attraction"
:iconquetions:
~quetions Apr 12, 2007, 2:52:54 PM
haha I know what you mean. Only I sometimes get the feel like I have to be sometimes, and it's to older people too.

--
'Caught in the act, sinfully Scrabbling. Quick, eat your words!"
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~Jyueru Apr 13, 2007, 3:32:26 AM
I understand competely

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"I have fallen so far from what I was
My skin is forever pale, my eyes a dark ring
Lifeless, a dead type of attraction"
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=meeden Apr 13, 2007, 5:01:43 PM
wonderfully expressed emotions! :silentkitty:
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~quetions Apr 13, 2007, 6:34:21 PM
thank you. It's been a while since I've been able to sit down and just write it . There was a full emotion behind it.

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'Caught in the act, sinfully Scrabbling. Quick, eat your words!"
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